How can I improve my writing based on feedback?

I've received some feedback on my writing, but I'm not sure how to apply it. Can you help?

Of course! What specific feedback did you receive, and what areas do you want to focus on improving?

The feedback mentioned that my arguments are weak and my transitions are abrupt.

Let's tackle the arguments first. Can you share one of your main arguments, and we can work on strengthening it?

Sure! I argued that social media impacts mental health, but I didn't provide enough evidence.

A good approach is to include statistics or studies that support your claim. Have you come across any research that you could reference?

I found a study that shows a correlation between social media use and anxiety. How can I incorporate that?

You can introduce the study in your argument by saying something like, 'Research indicates that increased social media use correlates with higher anxiety levels.' This adds credibility to your point!