How can I improve my book synopsis?

I just finished writing my book synopsis, but I feel like it needs some work. Can you help me improve it?

Of course! Please share your current synopsis, and I'll provide some suggestions for improvement.

Here's my synopsis: 'In a world where magic is forbidden, a young girl discovers her powers and must choose between safety and freedom.'

That's a great start! To enhance it, consider adding more emotional depth and stakes. How about: 'In a world where magic is forbidden, a brave young girl uncovers her hidden powers, forcing her to choose between the safety of her family and the freedom to embrace her true self.' What do you think?

I love that! It sounds much more engaging. Can you suggest any other changes?

Sure! You might want to hint at the antagonist or the main conflict to create more intrigue. For example: 'In a world where magic is forbidden, a brave young girl uncovers her hidden powers, drawing the attention of a ruthless enforcer. She must choose between the safety of her family and the freedom to embrace her true self.' This adds tension!