How can I improve my story's narrative flow?

How can I improve my story's narrative flow?

To improve your narrative flow, consider using transitions between scenes and varying sentence lengths for rhythm.

What are some techniques for showing rather than telling?

You can use sensory details, actions, and dialogue to show emotions and settings instead of just stating them.

Can you give me an example of a strong opening line?

Sure! A strong opening line could be: 'The last time I saw her, the sky was a bruised purple, and the air crackled with unspoken words.'

How do I create compelling characters?

Develop your characters by giving them clear goals, flaws, and backstories that influence their decisions throughout the story.

What should I avoid when editing my narrative?

Avoid excessive exposition, clichés, and inconsistent character behavior, as these can disrupt the reader's immersion.