What are some examples of 'show, don't tell' in writing?

Can you give me some examples of 'show, don't tell' in writing?

Sure! Instead of saying 'She was sad,' you could show it by writing, 'Her shoulders slumped, and she stared at the ground.'

That's a great example! Can you give me another one?

Of course! Instead of telling 'It was a hot day,' you could show it by saying, 'The pavement shimmered in the heat, and sweat dripped down his back.'

I see! How can I apply this technique in my own writing?

To apply 'show, don't tell,' think about the emotions or scenes you want to convey and use sensory details to illustrate them.

Thanks! Any tips for practicing this technique?

Try rewriting paragraphs from your favorite books, focusing on showing rather than telling. It’s a great exercise!