What are some examples of 'show, don't tell' in writing?

Can you give me some examples of 'show, don't tell' in narrative writing?

Sure! Instead of saying 'She was angry,' you could show it by writing, 'Her fists clenched, and her face turned red.'

That's a great example! Can you provide another one?

Of course! Instead of telling 'It was a hot day,' you could show it by saying, 'The sun beat down mercilessly, and sweat trickled down his back.'

I see the difference now. Can you explain why 'show, don't tell' is important?

Absolutely! 'Show, don't tell' engages readers by allowing them to experience the story through sensory details, making it more immersive.

Thanks! Do you have any tips for practicing this technique?

Yes! Try rewriting sentences from your favorite books to show rather than tell, and pay attention to how authors use sensory details.