What are some examples of showing versus telling in narrative writing?

Can you give me examples of showing instead of telling in narrative writing?

Sure! Instead of saying 'She was angry,' you could show it by writing, 'Her fists clenched, and her face turned crimson.'

That's a great example! Can you provide another one?

Of course! Instead of 'It was a hot day,' you could write, 'The sun beat down mercilessly, making the pavement shimmer.'

I see the difference now. How can I practice this technique?

You can practice by taking sentences that tell and rewriting them to show. Try to engage the senses!

Thanks! I'll try that. Any tips for identifying telling sentences?

Look for adjectives and adverbs that describe feelings or states. They often indicate telling rather than showing.