How can I use dialogue to create emotional impact in my writing?

How can I use dialogue to create emotional impact in my writing?

Using dialogue effectively can evoke emotions by reflecting characters' feelings, motivations, and conflicts. What specific emotion are you aiming to convey?

I want to convey sadness in a scene.

To convey sadness, consider using short, fragmented sentences. Allow pauses and silences to emphasize the weight of the moment. Would you like an example?

Yes, please provide an example.

Sure! Here’s a brief example: "I... I thought you’d stay. But you’re leaving?" Her voice cracked, silence hung heavy between them.

That’s powerful! How can I make it more impactful?

You can add body language and internal thoughts to deepen the emotional impact. For instance, describe her trembling hands or the tears in her eyes.