How can I revise my vision statement for clarity?

I feel like my vision statement is too vague. How can I make it clearer?

To make your vision statement clearer, focus on specific goals and values. What key message do you want to convey?

I want to emphasize innovation and community impact. Any tips on wording?

You could say, 'We envision a future where innovation drives community growth and enhances lives.' How does that sound?

That sounds better! Should I include a timeline or specific metrics?

Including a timeline or metrics can add clarity. You might say, 'By 2030, we aim to innovate solutions that benefit 10,000 community members.'

Great! Can you help me refine it further?

Of course! Let’s work on the wording together. What specific aspects do you want to highlight?