How can I express internal conflict in dialogue?

I'm writing a character who feels torn between loyalty to a friend and doing what's right. How can I show this in dialogue?

You can use dialogue to reveal their hesitation. For example, have them say, "I want to help you, but what you're doing is wrong..." This shows their internal struggle.

That makes sense! Should I also include their thoughts?

Absolutely! You can intersperse their dialogue with internal monologue, like, "I can't believe I'm even considering this..." to deepen the conflict.

What about body language? Should I describe that too?

Yes! Body language can enhance the dialogue. Describe them fidgeting or avoiding eye contact to show their discomfort.

Thanks! This is really helpful. Any tips for pacing the dialogue?

Try to vary the pace. Use short, clipped sentences during moments of tension and longer, reflective ones when they’re contemplating their choices.