What are some effective techniques for showing rather than telling in fiction?

What are some effective techniques for showing rather than telling in fiction?

One effective technique is to use sensory details. Instead of saying 'it was cold,' you could describe how the character's breath turned to mist.

Can you give me an example of that in a scene?

Sure! Instead of saying 'she was nervous,' you could show her fidgeting with her hands, avoiding eye contact, and biting her lip.

What about using dialogue to show emotions?

Absolutely! You can convey emotions through dialogue by using subtext. For example, a character might say, 'I’m fine,' but their shaky voice and clenched fists reveal otherwise.

Are there any other techniques I should know about?

Yes! You can also use body language and internal thoughts to show what a character is feeling without explicitly stating it.