What are some techniques for showing, not telling, in writing?

What are some techniques for showing, not telling, in writing?

One effective technique is to use sensory details. Instead of saying 'the room was cold,' you could describe 'the icy draft that made her shiver as she entered.'

Can you give me more examples of sensory details?

Sure! Instead of saying 'he was angry,' you might say 'his fists clenched, and his face turned a deep shade of red.' This shows the emotion through actions.

What about using dialogue? How can that help?

Dialogue can reveal character emotions and relationships. For instance, instead of saying 'she was nervous,' you could write, 'I-I just don’t know if I can do this,' she stammered, her voice barely above a whisper.

Are there any other techniques I should know about?

Yes! Metaphors and similes can also be powerful. For example, instead of saying 'he was fast,' you could say 'he darted like a rabbit escaping a predator.' This creates a vivid image.