What are some writing exercises to improve showing and telling?

What are some writing exercises to improve showing and telling?

Here are a few exercises you can try:

1. Sensory Details: Write a paragraph describing a scene using all five senses. Focus on what can be seen, heard, smelled, tasted, and felt.
2. Emotion Through Action: Write a scene where a character experiences a strong emotion, but instead of stating the emotion, show it through their actions and body language.
3. Dialogue Only: Write a conversation between two characters without any narrative. Let the dialogue reveal their feelings and the situation.

Can you give me an example of the emotion through action exercise?

Sure! Let's say your character is feeling anxious about giving a speech. Instead of saying, "She was nervous," you could write:

"Her hands trembled as she adjusted the microphone, and she wiped her sweaty palms on her skirt. She glanced at the audience, her heart racing, and took a deep breath, trying to steady her shaking voice."

That’s a great example! How can I incorporate more sensory details into my writing?

To incorporate more sensory details, try the following:

1. Focus on One Sense: Choose one sense to emphasize in each scene. For example, describe the sounds of a bustling market or the smell of fresh bread.
2. Use Metaphors and Similes: Compare sensory experiences to familiar objects or feelings to create vivid imagery.
3. Practice Descriptive Writing: Set a timer for 10 minutes and describe a place you know well, focusing on what you can see, hear, smell, taste, and touch.

Thanks! I’ll try those exercises. What other tips do you have for improving my writing?

You're welcome! Here are a few more tips:

1. Read Widely: Read different genres and styles to see how other authors show and tell.
2. Revise Ruthlessly: During editing, look for places where you can replace telling with showing.
3. Join a Writing Group: Sharing your work with others can provide valuable feedback and new perspectives.